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PostPosted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 4:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ግሩም ድንቅ ስንኞች ናቸው ... የቆሎው ::

ስለበቅሎ ስትገጥም አንድ ነገር ትዝ ብሎኝ ነው ::

በቅሎ በሌላም አገር ትገኛለች ? ወይስ በአገራችን ብቻ ?
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የቆሎ ተማሪው

አዲስ


Joined: 05 Feb 2008
Posts: 35

PostPosted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 4:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

ተጋላቢ (ዘጠኝ )

አካል ሽቅርቅሩ
ከደም -ከስጋ ድር መክረሩ
ከነፍስ ከመንፈስ ማግ መዳወሩ
ከፈቃደ -ሩካቤ መሸመኑ
ህልው ተብሎ መግነኑ
ሰብና ኑሮት መከወኑ
አንደበት የተሰኘ ቀላጤ - ልቦና ሚባል ጉበኛ
ህሊና ሚባል ሚዛን - ፍትርት ማያዛባ ዳኛ
ከዚህ ሁሉ ተጠንስሶ
ከስጋ ደም ተከልሶ
መኖሩ አልበቃው አለና
መረን ሆኖ
ባክኖ
ከፈቃደ -ነፍሱ ተኩዋኖ
እንደ አይን ጠፍቶ
እንደ "ፊዚዝ " ሙዋምቶ
በሱ ጦስ በሱ ዳፋ
ነፍስያ ትገፋ
ስጋ ሽቅርቅሩ
ለዚሁ ግብሩ
መዋቡ ማማሩ
መሳብ ማነውለሉ
ከራስ ማታገሉ
አልበቃው አለና
በሄደበት ሊያውል
ራሱን ሊያገለግል
አማትሮ በአንክሮ
እንዳያይ አዙሮ
ልምድ የለው ከጅምሩ
ስጋ ሽቅርቅሩ
ባሻው ሲጋደም
ካየው ሲያዘም
ለምሱ ሙዋች
ነው ዘማች
ስጋ ሽቅርቅሩ ከኛጋ ማደሩ
አልበቃው ብሎ ካመድ ተራ ሊወስደን
ቀሎ ሊያቀለን
ቼቼ ፈረሴ
ስጋዬ ነው ምሴ
ለሚለን ለኛ
ይገኝ ይሆን መለኛ
ይቀጥላል ...
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የቆሎ ተማሪው

አዲስ


Joined: 05 Feb 2008
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 11:03 pm    Post subject: ተጋላቢ (ዘጠኝ ) Reply with quote

ተጋላቢ (ዘጠኝ )

አካል ሽቅርቅሩ
ከደም -ከስጋ ድር መክረሩ
ከነፍስ ከመንፈስ ማግ መዳወሩ
በፈቃደ -ሩካቤ መሸመኑ
ህልው ተብሎ መግነኑ
ሰብና ኑሮት መከወኑ
አንደበት ከተሰኘ ቀላጤ - ልቦና ከሚባል ጉበኛ
ፈቃድ ከተሠኘ ሚዛን - ህሊና ከሚባል ዳኛ
ተጠንስሶ
ከስጋ ደም ተከልሶ
መኖር ሲገባው ጎልምሶ
የዳዴ ዘመኑኑን ሽሮ
ዙርያ ገባውን አማትሮ
መመልከት ሲገባው በአንክሮ
መለመላ አገዳውን አስውቦ
ጠኔያም አምሮውን አስርቦ
የውስጥ ጩኸቱን አፍኖ
ከፈቃደ -ህሊናው ተኩዋኖ
መረን ሆኖ ባክኖ
እንደ አይን ጠፍቶ
እንደ ጨው ሙዋምቶ
በሱ ጦስ በሱ መዘዝ
ክቡሩ ህልው ይወገዝ ?
ስጋ ሽቅርቅሩ
ለዚሁ ግብሩ
መዋቡ ማማሩ
መሳብ ማነውለሉ
ከራስ ማታገሉ
አልበቃው አለና
በሄደበት ሊያውል
ራሱን ሊያገለግል
አማትሮ በአንክሮ
እንዳያይ አዙሮ
ልምድ የለው ከጅምሩ
ስጋ ሽቅርቅሩ
ባሻው ሲጋደም
ካየው ሲያዘም
ለምሱ ሙዋች
ነው ዘማች
ስጋ ሽቅርቅሩ ከኛጋ ማደሩ
አልበቃው ብሎ ካመድ ተራ ሊወስደን
ቀሎ ሊያቀለን
ቼቼ ፈረሴ
ስጋዬ ነው ምሴ
ለሚለን ለኛ
ይገኝ ይሆን መለኛ

ይቀጥላል ...
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የቆሎ ተማሪው

አዲስ


Joined: 05 Feb 2008
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 11:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ሰላም ክርስትያን ስለመልካም አስተያየትህ አመሰግናለው ..
በቅሎ እንደብዙዎቹ የቤት እንሰሳ (የጋማ ከብት ) በብዙ ሃገራት ከሰው ተላምዳ ትኖራለች ቅዝቃዜ ግን እምብዛም አይመቻትም እንደ ደቡቡ ጫፍና እንደ ሰሜኑ ጫፍ ማለቴ ነው
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dama978

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Location: ethiopia

PostPosted: Fri Feb 15, 2008 4:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Cowards like yeQolo Temari fight the most despicable wars, defending the indefensible hate. In defending hate, they eat and vomit hate. Irrational in their reasoning, they deny their target the corresponding right to breathe air that eqaually available to all who have noses. Good to know that Ethiopia though, in large part, has dealt with them so that those the living we will not suffoctate.
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አዲስ


Joined: 05 Feb 2008
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 16, 2008 5:02 pm    Post subject: ተጋላቢ አስር Reply with quote

ተጋላቢ (አስር )
ገራሙ : ጋላቢ የተላመደ አድራሹ
ድንጉላው : መልከኛ ተብዬ ጠቃሹ
ሌጣው : አሻፈረኝ ባይ መራሹ
መጋዣው : ሸክም ምሱ አጎንባሹ
እኒህ የፈረስ ልጆች መልከ -ብዙ
ሆደ ሰፊው መገዘዙ
መንገደኛው ውግዙ
ገባጣው ብልዙ
መልከኛው ግብዙ
እነደወትሮ ከወንዝ ውሃቸውን ሊገስሩ
ጥማት ድርቀታቸውን ሊያበሩ
ከዛው ከዥረቱ ሲገናኙ
በሃቅ ላይዳኙ
አቤት ሲሞኛኙ
ፈረስ ሆና አፋቸውን ላወቀ
ስንት ጉድ ባወቀ
ይቀጥላል
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dama978

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Location: ethiopia

PostPosted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 12:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeqolo Temari,
On a second reading of your poem, I think my first reaction posted above is wrong. I really reret it. Please accept my sincere appology.
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የቆሎ ተማሪው

አዲስ


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Posts: 35

PostPosted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 2:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

ወንድሜ ሆይ ይቅርታህን ከልብ ተቀብዬአለሁ :: ከዛም አልፎ ሳልረዳ ያሰከፋሁዋቸውን ወገኖቼን ማሩኝ ለማለት ድፍረትን ካንተ ስለተማርኩ እግረመንገዴን አመሰግንሃለው ::
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dama978

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 3:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I may postpone making comments on opinions and views written in Amharic until I read them more than once by visiting Warka so often. My regret commenting on your poem is due to the fact that I neede to read the Amharic texts more than once.

When I read in English, I make sure I understood and have no regrets on reactions to poems or prose in Eglish. English literature series written by Ethiopians are not hard to undertsand. I have no idea why they can't improve while living in democratic and English North America?

Dama
the Outsider to Warka Community
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አዲስ


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PostPosted: Fri Feb 22, 2008 2:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

ተጋላቢ አስር

ይህ መጥፎ አመሌ
ክፉው የኔ ቆሌ
የገዛ ስጋዬ አካሌ
ያሰኘኝ ዘልዛሌ
አጉል ነጂ ሾፌሬ
አቅበጥብጥ አንዝሬ
አሻፈረኝ ቢለኝ አልዳኝ
አሳሬን ፍዳዬን ቢያበላኝ
ጉርቦዬን ፈጥርቆ
እስትፋሴን መንጭቆ
ሊወስደኝ ሲከጅል ሲያደባ
ሊፈጥመኝ ዘመኔ ሳይጠባ
እኔም እያልኩ ፈራ -ተባ
እንደ ፋፋ -ጠር ስባባ
ከልማዴ ተጋብቼ
አሱም እያለኝ ቼቼ
ስጋለብ ሰንብቼ
ድንገት አንዳች ቢቀርበኝ
ልቦናዬ ቢታረቀኝ
መፍተሄ ልሻ ስለትን ልሳል
ቢሻለኝ ብዬ ከአዝማቼ ብገላገል
ሌት ገና ጎህ ሳይቀድ
ክፉ ልቤም ሳይቀላምድ
ደፍ ደፍ እያልኩ
እራሴን እየተጠየፍኩ
ምርር ብዬ አዝኜ
በሚሰራኝ ስራ በግኜ
አረ ጌታ ሆይ ደመ በራድ አርገኝ እያልኩ ስሳል
ፀሎት -ማድረሱ አልሆን ብሎኝ ሳብሰለስል ሳብተለትል
ባሳብ ሰጥሜ ስዋዥቅ
ስሜት አርሶኝ ስነፈርቅ
ያይን አባቴ አቦይ ነብሮ
ቤተስኪያን ሲሳለሙ እንደወትሮ
እኔ ካለሁበት ከደጀ -ሰላሙ ጉዋሮ
ተሰርቀው ፀሎቴን ያደምጡ ኖሮ
በዘንጋቸው ጎኔን ወጋ አርገው
የኩንቢ ያህል አሰግገው
ስማ አንተ ጋድሚያ የሰው ኮርማ
መልከጥፉ ማስጠሎ ጉማማ
ማድመጥ ከቻልክ ዦሮ ካለህ ሚሰማ
ያንተ ጉድ ስለት ሳይሆን ስለሚሻ ካራ
ቁርጥ ጉምድ አርገህ ጣለው ለስጋህ አትራራ
አዎ መፍትሄው መሳል ሳይሆን ስለት
ረድዔተ -ፀጋ ሳይሆን ድፍረት
ያኔ በስምንተኛው ቀን አይንህ ደም ሲያቀርዝ
እንባህ ዱብ ዱብ እያለ ሸለፈትህ ሲገረዝ
አርር ብለህ ስታነባ
የኔን ሆድ ስታባባ
እንዳይቀጥል በዚህ ሁናቴ
ተፈስሃ ነበር ምርቃቴ
ክበድበት ነበር ፀሎቴ
ለወግ ያብቃህ ነበረ ምኞቴ
አሁን ደሞ ከስንት አመት በሁዋላ
ቆይታ ዘመንህን ሳሰላ
ጦስህ መዘዝህን ሁላ
ምርቃቴ ስለሆነ ያረገህ አለሌ
ቀበቶ አልባ መረን ዘልዛሌ
አይንህን ከድኜ እንዳስገረዝኩኝ
አይንህን ከፍቼ ጉመደው ላለሁኝ
ከስለት አጋባው ብዬ መክራለሁኝ

ክፉ ግልቢያ ደንገላሳ
አበላኝ አበሳ ..
ይቀጥላል
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ዱዲ

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Joined: 05 Mar 2004
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 22, 2008 6:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

የቆሎ ተማሪ .... ለኛስ አስተማሪ ነህ !!
ከላይ እስከ ታች ወረድኩት የምትገርም ብዕረኛ ነህ ::
በገሀዱ አለም የታወቅክ የስነጽሁፍ ሰው መሆን አለብህ ::
በርታም አልልህ የበረታህ ነህና !
ብቻ ሳታቅዋርጥ ጫረው ... እኛም እንኮምኩመው !
ባርኔጣዬን ከፍ አድርጌ ከወገቤ ሰበር ብያለሁ ...ለችሎታህ !!!!!

ዱዲ ነኝ
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የቆሎ ተማሪው

አዲስ


Joined: 05 Feb 2008
Posts: 35

PostPosted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 4:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ወንድሜ ዱዲ
ሆይ ስለመልካም አስተያየትህ ከልብ አመሰግናለው ቢሆንም ገና ከሌሎች ረድፍ ያልግባሁ ለመድረስ ግን ምሻ ተማሪ ነኝ ያውም ባለስንጥር ...
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Joined: 02 Oct 2005
Posts: 352
Location: ethiopia

PostPosted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 10:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

yeqolo Temariw(የቆሎ ተማሪው ),

I stand by my first reaction.You're too bitter about nothing. Get over your sick obsession. I am doing the right thing. Oftending bigotted individuals who write is expected in media. Reviews friendly or hostile is common practice depeding on individual reader with respect or without respect even in the most crude and uncultured society. The writer's unhapinnes with an individual reader must not be a cause for him to call the whole ethnic mobilization in his supprt claiming that he is only fattening his ethnic group. To mobilize the power of the whole organization, though the irresponsible, the gullible and the selfish may have initiated it, endowed with fairness you can reject it as racist, inhumane, cruel and fascist. If you're morally dysfunctional to abide by such codes, the likes of you would be ruling society to its decay. How many of you would kill one person? After all, you have serious challenges than such minor incident of correpondence.

BTW, I used to see your name, just your name I remeber nothing attached to in a coner, in the defunct medrekforum.com. You did not say much about Ethiopia unlike now claiming an ethnic hero.

I had opened many topics on Ethiopian history going back to Sabean times,
Foreign relations that served Meles to establish friendship with surrounding countries such as Sudan, Yemen to isolate Eritrea, sadly Meles is also using it against Ethiopian refugees in these countries
Alahram review,
OLF's landclaims,
TPLF's economic and political hegemony,
the persecution of Islam in Ethiopia
etc.
ወላጁ እንዳለው ያገባንያል ብዪ ነው ::
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የቆሎ ተማሪው

አዲስ


Joined: 05 Feb 2008
Posts: 35

PostPosted: Mon Feb 25, 2008 2:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

ተጋላቢ (አሰራአነድ )

እምቅ ገሞራ ሲፈነዳ
ሲነቀነቅ የኛነት ተራዳ
ሲናጥ ሲደበላለቅ
እየጋመ ሲፍለቀለቅ
ከልብ መዝገብ የታጨቀ ሲቃ
ገንፍሎ ሲያበቃ
እኛነት ሲጋለጥ -እርቃን ሲውል
አሻፈረኝ ሲል ለግልግል
ግለት ነዲዱን
መለብለብ መንፈሩን
ሽቅብ መጎኑን
እንቢ አሻፈረኝ ብሎ ሲቆጣ
እንደ መታፈኛው ለመፈንጂያው ቀን ሲመጣ
ገሞራው ሲፈነዳ
ሲነቀነቅ ተራዳ
ሲናጥ ሲደበላለቅ
እየጋመ ሲፍለቀለቅ
የእንፋሎቱ የቁጣው ሽታ
ሰንፋጭ የምቹ ሽውታ
መጥፎው ጠረን ብስናት
ብርቱ ግሳት
ከሆድቃው ሳይሆን ከእሱነቱ
ከውስጥ ከደመ -ስሜቱ
የስጋ - ደዌ ያህል ከአካሉ እየፈራሰ
በነዲድ ቁጣው እየታመሰ
ከሚያውቀው ያወቀውን
ከአየው ያውን
ሳያመቻምች ሳያዛባ
ሳያጋንን ሳይቀባባ
ድብቁን ቢገልጠው
ስውሩን ቢከላው
በቀን በአደባባይ ከብርሃን አዛምዶ
በሰው አንደበት በሰው ልሳን አዋዶ
ከብዙው የነቁጡዋን እኩሌታ
የሞጭሙዋጫ አይኑን ትኩርታ
የውስጡን ምልክታ
በቀን ቢያውለው
ይባል ይሆንን ስጋዊ
አሮጌ ሰው አዳማዊ… ?
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አቡቲ

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Joined: 09 Mar 2005
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 8:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

የቆሎ ተማሪ እንዴት ነህ ?

ይበል ብያለሁ ታዲያ ጋላቢው ምን ገዶት ሁሉ
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እንደ ዋናው ...ምነውሳ እንደ ጋላቢ ሆኖ ምላሽ የሚሰጥ ወይም ከዚህ አውተርትር እሰጥ አገባ የሚዶል ጠፋ ....ምናልባት ከሁለት ልዩ ተጋላቢ የተገኘ ተጋላቢ ጋላቢውም በዚያው መጠን የበዛ ስለሆነ ይሆን ወይስ እንደው የጽሑፉ ይዘት ከገሀዱ አለም አንጻራዊ የሰው ልጅ ሕይወት ጋር በአንባቢያን ዘንድ ተነጻጽሮ ስላልታየ ?

እንዲህስ ካልሆነ በቅሎ ተጋላቢ ብሎ ሳያመሰጥር እንዲያው ላይ ላዩን በገለብ ገለብ ቋጠሮ "በላ ሞክረኛ " የሚልህ መጥፋቱ አስደምሞኝ ነው መከሰቴ


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